Classmates Critique

3/27/23

Critique Classmates animations.

Video 1 - i think the video could have had better transitions and didn’t have a storyline but the music was good. Some clips were short and you didn’t have enough time to see the clips.

Video 2 - I think the video was better but it was too fast and it didn’t have any sound to go to the clips. The titles needed to be longer because you couldn’t fully read them.

Video 3 - The video has sound effects which i liked but it needed better transitions.

Video 4 - the video has the best storyline so far and it had sound effects but the cut off at the end is awkward. And some text was hard to read.

Video 5 - at the start it was good but then we lost sounds and music and the plot fell off.

Video 6 - some of the texts were hard to read and it needed more sound effects. But it was better than the others.

Video 7 - this video had a good plot and we could read the titles, the end could’ve been better but it was good.

Video 8 - I liked the music and sound effects. It was nicely done, there were extras that really added to the animations.

Video 9 - The music and sound effects are really good on this animation. The plot was a little weak but it was still.

Video 10 - i don’t think the plot was there, it was a cool thought to have 2 animations on but it wasn’t executed well enough

Video 11 - I didn’t like the music and the sound effects weren’t that good. The plot wasn’t there.

Video 12 - it has potential but theres no sound effects and at some points the plot got loose. The last titles weren’t done right.

Video 13 - It wasn’t bad i think the plot could’ve been better and some text were hard to see, but it wasn't bad. I liked the music. It was creative

2/16/23

Chavez vs Cortez

I think Cortez because she has more special projects while Chavez has more simpler project. Cortez has more details in the animations that make them longer while Chavez doesn't.

Diaz vs Garcia

I think Garcia is better because he has more longer animations with a plot but i think he shouldn't draw out the words, but instead should get someone to speak it and he can edit it in. If Garcia could edit someone speaking it then he could also add music which would help add to the animation so much.

Stephens vs Svestik

I think both are very good but I'm going to have to go with Stephens because his is original and it also sound good while Svestik recreated the gravity falls theme song. I also don't like the tone of Svestiks song i prefer more deeper songs but nonetheless they both did very good.

Perez vs Martinez

I think Perez because in Martinez's song the guitar was a little out of place but i liked the beat of the song, Perez was just smoother and everything went more together. In the first one I like the vibe better.